June 2009

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A twilight feeling

(written on 29 June,2009)

 

Life is very steady

and cool now-a-days,

as I can clearly see

in this beautiful eve

of this mid-summer time,

with all trees dressed in green

and breeze gently blowing

and me, relaxing on a couch

with a can of beer

held in my  hand,

in the green-lash-lawn

of my expensive home

named 'A village in Rome'.

 

And in a more precise way

I'm well settled ,well established

as people say,in my life;

True love

 Jab hum vishwas karte  hai ki dosti pyaar hai,

 tab bhi log usi dosti ko jiye jaate hai zindagi bhar

tak sacche pyaar ki talaash main..........

              Lekin kabhi aapne suna hai kuch log aise bhi hote hai jo pyaar ko dosti kehte hai,

               sirf Zindagi bhar unka saath pane ki liye.......................

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Terraforming Abuse

Terraform Abuse

As I listen to the inconsistent chirping cry of birds;
for they now retreat.
I feel the wind’s swirling shift
as ancient trees creak beneath
heavy weighted sorrows.
With dew drop’s kiss on dotted pensive brow
I taste these yielding words… heard much too late.
For nature now, she shyly speaks
with cautious earthen tone;
as town’s, it’s said, have hearts of brittle stone.

Her thoughts are hushed and yet professed

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Rains

Drops of rain,

Nei, I dont call it drops of heaven

are pure and calm

 

Off they fall

call it snow

or call it dew

They make you dance to their tunes

 

Dull roads brighten up,

Hungry animals sip it up,

Men, women and kids rejoice

 

loss of words

or rather choice of words

better to talk less than more

 

Come on rains, enjoy!

Pour ur heart out, let all the sad tears wash away

 

 

 

Doesn't feel like.........

doesn't feel like stayin calm anymore
feelings rise from the ashes
and tickles my heart's core

doesn't feel like staying mum anymore
words travel from chest to brain
and my hands find someone to adore

doesn't feel like staying numb anymore
drops come till there and stoned
and my eyes find those 2 eyes that lured

doesn't feel like staying alone anymore
for glimpse of that pretty face
closes my eyes porch
and stares at the goddess of darkness and sore.

doesn't feel like living without my soul anymore
its gr8!! a part of me is with her

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Title-less

No noise,

No voice,

I'm left with no other choice.

 

This hurt,

This pain,

This is what is famously known as life.

 

Screaming eyes,

Silent tears,

The truth of hurt I failed to decieve

 

No emotions,

No affections,

Zombiness is now a routine of life

 

Walk through the day

Run through the night

Its like a lover cheating me night after night

 

Expressing an elemental emotion

[This is merely a view, an 'experimental' feeling , (of course this is, beyond doubt, a fundamental elemental emotion of the integrated-emotion-spectrum of a human mind and I just emphasized on expressing it in a free way) ..........there is none/nothing to impose on this feeling :) :) ]
 

 

Huss !! keep quite ,

hold your breaths a bit

and just put your ear

with a bit care

close to my skin ,

and you will listen

the shout of my blood

flowing through the heart

and the vessels and the cells

ZINDAGI (The English translation is also available)

zindagi jeene ki arzoo na rahi,

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